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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-12-18 06:35 PM


Nothing As Lonely
As When You're Alone

So, here I am
all alone again.
I don't want to
write of just one.
I want to
write of two.
That would be
me and you.
Me, I know
all too well.
How many times I
tried and how many
times I failed.
And you, you
seem so far away.
Perhaps I'll meet
whoever you are
some day.
A woman who will
come and will stay.
And then it will
be me and you,
and again I will
find myself
writing of two.

JamesLee
December16
2003

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-12-18 06:38 PM


I know the feeling, James M

hugs
M

Daniel van Vliet
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since 2001-08-31
Posts 80

2 posted 2003-12-18 07:17 PM


"How many times I
tried and how many
times I failed.
And you, you
seem so far away."

.... so far away! good write.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-12-18 07:18 PM


Enjoyed the read James...
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

Nightshade
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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-12-18 08:33 PM


You will find her - take heart dear James. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
5 posted 2003-12-18 09:29 PM


Oh James

Your words are haunting and I know them well.  Enjoyed

            Ariana

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2003-12-18 10:05 PM


James - she's there, and will be there. Best to you...

BC

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2003-12-18 10:11 PM


Oh James

Your words saddened me and I can only hope that you find the love you so truly deserve.
Wishing you a Happy Christmas.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
8 posted 2003-12-19 12:49 PM


I like!
Merry Christmas    
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2003-12-19 02:07 AM


hope she finds her way into your space
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

10 posted 2003-12-19 06:49 AM


Wishing you the best always...
Merry Christmas James...

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