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Thinking of Me
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
THINKING OF ME Fondly I stare into the lakes reflection And reflect on that image of me. I see........perfection blessed by Aphrodite's kiss And I smile, causing the waters to ripple; I want to sing to myself of eternal love and jealous Angels But my reflections voice is silent. I wonder if Narcissus had this moment, Quietly admiring the beauty of his soul Before being transformed into a flower As a reminder that vanity should be left to the Gods. Marcel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep...true words of wisdom |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely beautiful reflections! I love it. Love, Margherita  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Can't be bothered with another's vanity..and have learned well how to deal with that number, good subject matter |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Powerful words written here... Nice job. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Marcel! I was just thinking of you "Thinking of Me" ~ so sayeth Narcissus! lol Thoroughly enjoyed this uniquely intriguing poem. This may be the first poem that I have read on this theme ~ and I loved it!  Warm hugs, EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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