Open Poetry #30 |
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Dogwood Summersaults |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii ![]() |
June 10th, 2002 In the under-dog world Of under ground summersaults, And dogwood lily trees The stream flows, and let’s low her shaking legs, and bloody Flow. She gets high in the wild in the middle of the night. She handles womb thorns and Graciously stumbles across The isles. She studies in a book With no lines. Kindly, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
well hello my morning smile. It's wonderful to see you again, Amelia. and wonderful is the right word, for once again I'm in a state of wonder after reading you. Something's different here--you are more linear in thought and all polished pretty, but you still have the zen quality, but now it's as though you have explained the "koan." You keep growing, my dear friend. I'll keep watching you amazed. ![]() |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Intriguing! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely thoughts here...captivating! |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, this is one to read more than once, and only in part because I love dogwoods. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Happy Hawaiian Holidays to you and what a treat to read your words (which I can always take a multitude of ways.) Saw this also in 3 different lights, and probably not at all what you were saying, but to me that is what intrigues me about you - it is "thinker's poetry." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hello Amelia...very good to read you you've been away too long...please stay longer now |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I like the way you tumble things! More-More-More! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
hello every one, thank you kindly for all the comments on this pass by thought. kindly,amelia Kindly, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh how I've missed reading you. You always leave me in awe. keeping this. Maree ![]() "I can't believe |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Well, it didn't take a couple of days! I remember reading your work before, Amelia. It is amazing!. THIS ONE IS OUTSTANDING! You are very talented! .......jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Amelia, The tumble of your tumble weed will has left a seed indeed, enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RedHeartAngryBraids~ You are AMAZING ...~ This little 'pass by thought' caught me in it's worded-web and held me suspended in the creative thoughts of your penning~ Good ALWAYS to see you visit us, dear~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Amelia! I too love your 'pass by thoughts' Wonderful write and so good to see you in the forums again! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very interesting and thought provoking write... me likes things like this ![]() Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i can't read any ones post, Hum? kindly Kindly, |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Hi Amelia, you always seem so adept at thinking out of the box. i'm so envious of your talent. i'm keeping this as well too... ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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