Open Poetry #30 |
So Still The Sky |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So perfectly still was the sky on this beckoning winter's night. Beautifully stranded in a string of pearls weaving their way through opal clouds, which dressed up a cotton candy sky. Lacerated wafers of wind licked barren treetops shadowing the crisp winter air. Jack Frost could not resist tasting fall’s final fermented fragments while wind whispered secrets into my ear through my hair. I spied a solitary star hanging like a bright cabin porch light turned on too early so as not to serve any real purpose. So very still this sky that my steadfast gaze locked on that star. Alone, strangely unblinking, it too seemed to meet my locked and inquisitive gaze. This shifting sky, such poetry in motion filled my hungry, searching soul silently with wondrous words. It was more like a string of whistling wind thoughts. The type of thoughts that tend to drift lazily over a pastel sky that has seen far too many dying sunsets. I too often get whisked away in wind wisped clouds atop a cotton candy sky, as this winter one-eyed sky. Seems we both serve no real purpose except to remind others of the wonder of creation and to give pleasure to others. ~* Happy Holidays *~ Let there be peace on earth, and let it begin with me. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (12-18-2003 02:05 AM).] |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Sharon, you are wonderful! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WOWWWWWWW... I shall treasure this read... Fantastic writing PoetFriendMysteria Hugs2uAlways *~coco~* |
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Unsure Poet Junior Member
since 2003-12-11
Posts 10Savannah, Georgia |
Great poem. I too will read this many more times. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I could see your breath in the cold night air, shar. Gorgeous presentation from someone who is truly a ray of light. Nyah. giggle. So there. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Every word was magic. A visual of a cold evening if ever I read one! Wonderful!!! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This is wonderful, Sharon. Your perspectives are always so unique and revealing. Thank you. Happy Holidays to you, too. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my goodness, sharon.... this is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful!! Just perfect, it is!! Hugs, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sharon, this is beyond spectacular. A real treasure to read over and over again. Christmas Blessing of joy and love to you and your family. Huggles, Marti and Ron |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Your other face is as beautiful as this one. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful Sharon. Have a wonderful holiday season. And...enjoy DC!! Wish I could come too! ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Stunning imagery and feeling, Sharon! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This shifting sky, such poetry in motion filled my hungry, searching soul silently with wondrous words. It was more like a string of whistling wind thoughts. ~*~ Poetry in Emotion... Well done, Sharon |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
WOW! Thank you everyone. I wrote this and wondered if it was even good enough to post. I had just come back from a walk at my son's house, and was "watching my breath" and writing this at the same time. I am delighted you enjoyed it! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sharon, this is absolutely exquisite! I am tucking it into my library to enjoy over and over again. Thankyou sweet one. hug, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Chris I am so happy you liked it thank you, and hope you have a wonderful holiday season. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it's lovely "watching your breath" in words M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, lady... and though you have others, what a worthy purpose that is. *S* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Merry Christmas you two, and thank you so much for reading my poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love the serenity in this, sweet friend, I wish for us all to look to the heart of Mother Nature and Father Time more and cherish all the natural blessings, sweet friend, for beauty is in the song of a bird, the glisten of a star, the soft sound of a stream, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
Wonderfully worded and felt here. I love this poem and the feelings it brings. Thank you Mysteria. Tony. |
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