Open Poetry #30 |
Inspired (For Cpat) |
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The light, I say, does not dwell Within the sun nor sky But rather, within the soul Spewing forth from the enabled eyes The befuddlement of others is no longer My responsibility And never should have been Nor is it yours to coddle As if a security blanket Hiding truth The forked tongue of some Snakes past me now Knowing the venom it carries No longer viable Impotent I looked to what has past And smile At the wisdom I have gained And turn my head also Not in sorrow For my home still stands Still shines With the light of a softer soul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A very beautiful inspired write Susan! Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yep, she's home....it is so darn good to read your words again Susan....what a great Christmas gift to passions! Hugs. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! I enjoyed this, light of a softer soul |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful words Susan... hugss M |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
such a soft word, this was absolutely beautiful! It's so good to read you again. Take care and Happy Holidays, Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan...good to see you and this inspired poem! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling at you--- I saw some promise in "leaving the light"-- after all Solistice IS the 22... I AM smiling today, m'friend. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well said. When you hit the nail, you hit it square... Maybe we should start a petition huh?!? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you everyone. And Ron? It's only 'cause I miss ya... |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
a softer soul, indeed... this looks good on you, dear. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, this is outstanding! What a good place to be. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, the title says it all, you truly were. Thank you, Susan. |
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