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Ambergris
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Ambergris Set upon a whim now hoary I wait within my purgatory Watching embers spew of bile Running Waters Rivers rile Down it flows with burning core Making char upon the floor Building Islands o’er the sea Blackened sands of misery Challenging the winds of change Daring time to rearrange Filled with damning odors smell This is where it borders hell. Upon the edge of retribution Sheering heads in execution Bellowing a raging whale Spewing ambergris of bale Used today to perfume court The very thing that I had bought |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
wonderful flow and rhyme Sey, much enjoyed. Good morning hugs coming to you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, Mr. Morning Sunrise...good morning to you as well... I want to thank you graciously for your continued support on all of my poems...you not only take the time to read (which probably takes a good part of your day) hehehhehe, but to also leave kind comments. Sy...thank you for your artistry, creative innovations...sharing your extremely wonderful melodiac poetry and rhyme, wisdom, and the kindness you extend is that of a very gentleman. Thank you, and Merry Christmas to you and yours. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful wonderful words you weave for us this morn Sy! Do you have the time for a spot of tea? ~Morning hugs, tea, and me, Nancy~  ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From the bowels men throw in towels... ~*~ Heh...I think I know what I mean in that... I'll bet you'll figure it out, too...  Good morning Sy! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My goodness, someones been fanning Randys flame.  Me thinks hes got a belly full of heartburn with this hellfire write. *L* But I do so love when he rages and roars... and you and that clever pen...I just have to smile at the tie in of your title and your closing couplet. Another poetic coup for you my King of Kewl.  *ww*   I can remember Forever December, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit, Morning hugs and thank you. LeeJ Merry Christmas to you and yours. And your poetry is the scroll within my hanging sock. LOL Nancy, Merry Christmas my dear and how about a little spirit in the tea. LOL Hugs Sunshine Yes I do. LOL hugs. JM You read me like an open book Or should I say babbling brook WWRS |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well now, this is certainly a write to ponder this melting morning! Hugs to you Seymour and banana muffins too! Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I love your wording and style Seymour. Eric |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, Sy.....I wonder what kinds of dreams you have? This poem read like the color and tone of one...very much enjoyed!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Is it time for an antacid yet? LOL, but this is a wonderful roar. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Seyspeare! ~ or is that "Moby"?!? lol ~ They say that with ambergris, "A little dab will doooya!" My goodness, you are so incredibly imaginative! How do you keep this up?!? ~ morning after morning, year after year!!! ~ but the Lord Above knows that all of us still on this Earthly plane are grateful that you do!!!  Loveya, Seyspeare! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, We can toast the banana muffins over our ponderings. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eric, And I love your coments. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie It was my love. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun Sometimes you got to roar. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel With answers like that no wonder you were given wings. LOL |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sey, your writing always leaves me with a surprise. Brilliantly executed!!!! Thought this belonged on top again. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sometimes you just have to let it out don't ya? I would say you spouted off darn good for the sweet man that you are ~* Happy Chunakah Sy and Isabel *~   Let there be peace on earth, and let it begin with me. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (12-18-2003 02:28 AM).] |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
Watching embers spew of bile Running Waters Rivers rile excellent. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, I'm glad that this came back up to the top. I don't like to miss any of your wonderful rhymes!! Hugs,  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana I can only thank you and wish you a happy hokiday. Mysteria You are a love, have a happy holiday. C? Thank you so much. garysgirl You are a sweetheart, Happy Holiday dear. |
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