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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-12-15 04:42 PM

Waiting

there is
not one drop
of tears
that I
do not regret

if I
could turn
time around
I would

if I
could
I would
change things

to where
I had not
hurt you

I sit
in silence
waiting for

forgiveness

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2003-12-15 04:43 PM

It's hard to wait for that...I hope it comes to you soon.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-12-15 04:57 PM

Every word....

....resonates. I can't imagine such an open and vulnerable poem not getting a response.

But then, there are many things I can't imagine, and they happen.....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2003-12-15 05:37 PM

your poetry moves to my inner core and resonates there - great write - Paul

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-12-15 05:45 PM

Lovely...I have thought these thoughts so many times...James

Antonio_L
Member

since 2003-12-01

Posts 110
NorthEast USA

5 posted 2003-12-15 06:50 PM

So sad and lonely sounding. When will the hurt go away...

Sweetly put.

Tony.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

6 posted 2003-12-17 02:31 PM

In tender
patience
comes the word

simply

misunderstood

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-12-17 09:11 PM

OneSlick~

'there is
not one drop
of tears
that I
do not regret

if I
could turn
time around
I would'

Oh, you read my heart as well as you write your own~

Happy Holidays dearest poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*`

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-12-17 09:21 PM

Forgiving is in the heart of the beholder, but it's an awful way to feel when you're on the opposite end. I could forgive a life time, but I won't beg for it.

You are such an expressive poetess,
and your writing is truly a gift, Helen~

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