Open Poetry #30 |
Once Upon a Christmas Eve... |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Once upon a Christmas Eve, A blizzard raged with no reprieve, Biting winds straight from the north, No man nor creature ventured forth. A new born child, a baby boy Should be a time of boundless joy, An accident, a father dies, Left alone, a mother cries. Times were lean, the cupboards bare, As she sat there in despair, Fire dying, wood near gone, Would they make it to Christmas dawn? Then at the door, there came a knock, It must have been, nigh ten o'clock. There stood a man she did not know, In the cold and blowing snow. May I come in, stand by your fire, To warm myself my sole desire, For just a moment, please be so kind, Then I'll be gone, if you don't mind. She let him in, thought, how can I not? I'll get some food, it's not a lot, A slice of bread, a cup of tea, How is it that you came to be Out in a blizzard on Christmas Eve, Please stay the night, no need to leave, But he replied, I now must go, I've things to do, I thank you though, Through the door, into the night, When she saw in fire's light, An envelope, just laying there, Where he'd been standing, on a chair, To the door, she ran real fast, Where she saw the storm had passed, North winds had waned, fresh fallen snow, Sparkled bright in moon's soft glow. No man she saw, to her surprise, No footprints lay before her eyes, In puzzlement, she turned inside, Her son now slept, no longer cried, She picked up the envelope, Filled with money, filled with hope, On Christmas Eve, in storm's relent, A Christmas moon; an angel sent. [This message has been edited by Tim (12-22-2003 12:15 AM).] |
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Kazeru Junior Member
since 2003-12-16
Posts 31 |
Wow, I really like this poem... Indeed Christmas is the time of miracles and you perfectly caught that sentiment is this poem... Excellent work! Greetz Kazeru ->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<- |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
With the cash filled envelop a nice modern day swing to a folkloric-like tale...best of holidays to you Tim |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Loved your story and poem! Merry Christmas! ~ARH |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim...I loved this positive heart lovely poem!!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very very beautiful Tim! May you and yours have a blessed Christmas. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The sensitivity of this... has pulled forth a few tears... thank you Tim for remembering what is important during this Season of giving. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-22-2003 10:17 AM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wow! I like it! Merry Christmas.... ~K~ |
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lamplighter New Member
since 2003-12-18
Posts 8Virginia, USA |
Excellent, Tim... Precious, Warm, wonderful. Well written, too! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice....James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome story, well told! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
One never knows the when or where of such an encounter. Pondering the possibility is always comforting. Nicely done, Tim! |
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