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Toe-rag, The Red-Toed Reindeer (repost from last year)
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Toe-rag, The Red-Toed Reindeer (repost from last year) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 Senryu And Picture By Ethel_GG ~*~ (Be sure to sing this while you're reading it. Now, the tune is obvious? LOL) Toe-rag the red-toed reindeer had a very shiny toe And all of the other reindeer used to laugh to see it glow But there were still two reindeer who didn't laugh and call him names They were Balladeer and Long John who all liked to play their games Then one foggy Christmas Eve in A-la-bam, down south They couldn't see through all the fog then they heard little Toe-rags mouth Balladeer and Long John went there helping him to get through They could see Toe-rags toe Santa saw it glowing, too Then for the rest of time on every Christmas Eve If you will look real close you will surely see For Santa fixed the problem they could then see far and near Up at the front of Santas sleigh are Toe-rag, LongJohn, and Balladeer (Okay, maybe it doesn't go exactly with the tune!! LOL) [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-15-2003 11:03 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Ethel, this is so cute...I'm sure it will be enjoyed by many |
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WannabePoet Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 62New York USA |
LoL, a very light poem, nicely written. I think we all have a bit of "toe rag" in us.  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
LOL PERFECT! HUgssss sweet lady...  Lauren~ ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Ethel - Perfect! Just one clarification. I lead, they follow! lol |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You have a great wit! Happy holidays! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Snicker, snicker, giggle, laugh. Love this garysgirl. Now I am going to have to find the version of Twas the Night Before Christmas I wrote years ago and post it if I can find it for you. I think you would get a kick out of it. Wonderful poem dear friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, thank you, sweet friend.  . . Wannabe, I'm glad that you liked my silly little poem. . . Lauren, thank you, sweet lady. . Hugs and love to you all,  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-15-2003 11:37 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LongJohn, thanks!! LOL But, does your toe shine too? LOL . . iliana, thank you! And, Happy Holidays to you, too! . . Kevin, go get you poem! LOL We all would love to see it. Thanks, my friend. . . Love and hugs to you all, Happy Holidays, Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... That does it... None of us should count on Santa arriving with those 3 tussling for the lead. *G* But that's okay... their poetic tussles ARE gifts! *G* |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
Now I don't yet know the people involved Ethel but it is fun and very well done! Tony.  |
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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
hehe!! I loved it! I couldn't help but sing the tune... and it went pretty well I think. Very fun! ~Whisper~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
suthern, you may be right!! LOL Thanks for reading. . . Tony, thank you for reading. You'll know them soon. LOL They're funny nuts. . . Whisper, thank you. I'm glad that you could sing with it. LOL . . Hugs to you all,  |
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