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J.C. Works On Christmas Eve
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J.C. Works On Christmas Eve |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
J.C. works on Christmas eve Down at the Star Light diner: Fifth and main, he pours Black coffee For the red eyed suit And other revelers, Late for their families Christmas-eve dinners; Talks them sober, Sends them home, forgiven. * "It's your birthday, man, You shouldn't have to work tonight", Shivers out, the skinny Topless dancer, Fully dressed, but newly fresh From spinning, nearly naked, 'round her pole for all the perv's. * It's no bother, It's my pleasure", his reply, "You must remember I've been sent with obligations, And the reason I have come here Is to serve" * end |
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Estel Junior Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 22 |
What an awesome poem. I really loved it--it's poignant and very well written. Thanks so much for posting this poem.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely done! Much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
wow, before I say anything else, gonna hit the library button so I can keep this. k, now that that's done... this is excellent. And amen to it, he humbly serves us, when we owe everything to him. Thank you for this... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Estel Thank you for the nice comment, glad you enjoyed this poem.......:-) ________ice ><> |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Nancy Thank you for the nice reply, your comments mean a lot to me....:-) ______ice ><> |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
GG Wow! "library button" now that makes me feel pretty special....:-) Thank you _________ice ><> |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love this ice. I HAD TO READ IT TWICE! Bravo dear friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ice, Well done my friend, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome write ice! A keeper for sure. hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"You must remember I've been sent with obligations, And the reason I have come here Is to serve" ~*~ And if we only followed by example... ah well, sigh... let's keep hoping, hey, Ice? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
really awesome poem..the gift that keeps on giving....delightful |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I love it ice. :-) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Ford, whether in classic or contemporary times, He is always serving us even at the most unexpected moments! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, Jesus loves you and everyone, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ford, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Love it Nice one Dave |
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