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If You Believe Your Heart
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If You Believe Your Heart |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And if you can believe in your heart When breezes blow and then depart Or the twinge in soul in night times thought And in your mind you find what sought The path seems smoother upon the walk The sun brings forth in angels talk The moon is brighter in shimmer down To bring the smiles and erase the frown And if you believe in your heart You will hear the tune of meadowlark With the rustle of wind blown limb To float in time upon your whim But the heart is only a bit inside Of the vast space where you abide So go beyond the heartstring call To let your all expand so tall And if you believe in your heart Then you have to know the soul is a part Of what we are and what we become To find our path upon beat of drum |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this read throughly. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely brilliant piece of writing here and every verse was savoured by this reader. "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched They must be felt with the heart" Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your cadence is a delight on the lips.  rhymes divine dear Logan.  "Nature's first green is gold, |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good onnnnnnnneeeeeeeee. (said in a jim carry voice) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Let the beat...be forever on the wind... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Got to have faith, hope and love, belief is everything! ~ARH |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
And if you believe in your heart You will hear the tune of meadowlark With the rustle of wind blown limb To float in time upon your whim the realness and love in this is astounding very beautifully written |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful logan...and nice to see you here...h |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Logan Well you got that right my friend. Well done. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Logan, thank you my friend, I NEEDED to read these words of wisdom so poetically penned. very well done, it is sooo good to be reading you again. HUGS |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Logan... reminded me somewhat of Kipling's "If". This is a keeper for my 'Logan' file. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"And if you can believe in your heart When breezes blow and then depart Or the twinge in soul in night times thought And in your mind you find what sought" Very well done!! Susan |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan...I don't know how I missed this one before...it's very beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleKeeper~ My sis is right ... this is just wonderful~ Thanks, Martie for unearthing it~ Love you, Keeper~ *Huglets* ~*LittleGoose*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And if you believe in your heart Then you have to know the soul is a part Of what we are and what we become To find our path upon beat of drum" ~ Logan I could have cited several other stanzas as well, but this was my favourite! Not only do you have the soul of a poet, you are a poet!  Love & Light, EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling here, at the twinge in the night as it aligns itself with the path of the heartbeat a beautiful write, Logan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Logan, you can't truly know how much I needed to read this tonight thank you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And if you believe in your heart Then you have to know the soul is a part Of what we are and what we become To find our path upon beat of drum Logan this is beautiful. A keeper indeed.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
If you believe in your heart Friends do linger, never to part For never alone when memories flow To fill the soul with golden glow Thank all of you for being so kind with your comments and thoughts. I feel fortunate to be in the company of all of you..with a very gentle smile to you all |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh boy I have been SO busy and missed this gem! Got your note - will look for him for you Beautifully done m'friend, and the rhyme was incredible. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very True, and beautifully written. TD |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, it is always the heart that matters most and is the compass rose that He puts in the pockets of our hearts to lead us to freedom! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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