Open Poetry #29 |
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The Sanity Within My Storms |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio ![]() |
Calamity and chaos line my feet; fallen from the sky leaves and branches taken by the nightride, I could build housesful with them. There is prophesy in the trees, and uncertainty in those that leave. Ring the seasons by the decades. They have known what they have watched and weathered, rooted but swaying on the winds of change, staying unwaivered, firmly their feet embedded in the root, they wear the badge of their fate like warriors, staying centered, sheltering me as I weep beneath them in the storms that have come to define me, insulated in the ancient history they've reaped their strength upon, as they've become the sanity within the storms that threaten to overtake me. ******** to my homeboy ******** [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-22-2003 10:55 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrifically penned,,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Enjoyed this read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Trees are your friends and are serving you well. You can build a new house with the branches and live there in peace and serenity--and with sanity! Meanwhile the storms can rage around you, but you will be safe and protected by Trees... ![]() EA |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Nicely done. Need I say more? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele? I saw you sitting there beneath the trees as they hovered like a protective mother hugging you with their branches sheltering from the harsh sun their leaves shade . . . What a beautiful gift to a caring friend they wear the badge of their fate like warriors, staying centered, sheltering me as I weep beneath them in the storms that have come to define me, Yes, our scars and all . . . absolutely beautiful writing xxoo |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Amazing write. Library. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and uncertainty in those that leave. Those six little words said a mouthful! One doesn't always have the answers, but if we are patient and honorable, they will eventually come Very much enjoyed |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
sheltering me as I weep beneath them in the storms that have come to define me, and this....... as they've become the sanity within the storms that threaten to overtake me. Special heart hugs to you, my friend. ![]() Ethel |
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