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dusty roads |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Some roads are just too dusty for my eyes, and no matter how I prepare for the view, my angles are always wrong... too many sharp overlapped thoughts that never seem to straighten themselves out, and the curves come up too soon. Guess I'll never be comfortable on the highway. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed your thoughts,, but don't the dusty road lead to the hyway? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
maybe some days and others, the bye way thanks Q, for your reply |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
i love to drive...but you're right, sometimes the dust limits your freedom. gotta learn how to see through the dust. when you figure out how, let me know. and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
no amount of fast-forward driving can clear all the dust clouds on life's highway, but I know I'll get behind the wheel again |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There are so many roads that one can take in life--it can be quite confusing at times--and uncomfortable!  EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hope you're okay Kacy... You seem sad and, oh I don't know... maybe it's just me. ~Hugs YOU!~
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) And that is why I always take the RTD to Boulder! (sad sigh) I hope everything is alright, sweet friend, the Denver area has bad highway systems right now since the huge population growth spur has occurred and there is too little space for all those automobiles, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kacy...we have those moments, don't we? I felt some fear here...but I know the poet will conquer and go whizzing down the road again, soon. Just don't forget to fill the gas tank! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kacy, I know the feeling well but something tells me this Lady here . . . YOU are pretty tough to keep in one place for too long *smile* xxoo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
All roads eventually take us to the unexpected where we are left the choice to pass without understanding or to stand and wonder at the view |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the unexpecte is the treasure of life, one never knows what the next second shall bring Very much enjoyed and a good good morning |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... while I enjoyed..lol..I have another take on dusty roads. While the dust can be choking and coat you with grime, they also offer the best views... I understand the intent of your poem and you convey it well... I just have love affair with back roads that slants my view to a different place when it comes to using them metaphorically... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot  |
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