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Open Poetry #29

hmmmm something goes here right??

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-10-07 06:39 PM

I'm cynical
almost bitter
familar with
the sweetness
of lies
almost to
the point
where I have
to tell
myself
to
breathe
I think
I've even
forgotten
what
love's residue
tastes like
upon my
soul's chalice
I grow
tired
of yesterday
hopeful
of tomorrow
...sometimes...
I even
have to
stop in the
middle of a dream
to tell my thoughts
to
hush
because
I just
know
where
it's going...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2003-10-07 06:42 PM

What's unsaid. And what's not.

I love the economy of your writing, Kris. It goes deep.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-10-07 06:42 PM

Very well done...and much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-10-07 07:19 PM

..wow...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-10-07 07:36 PM

Kris, that was superb writing! Really, truly, it was!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-10-08 05:31 PM

Kris,

I've even
forgotten
what
love's residue
tastes like
upon my
soul's chalice

ahh but what a nice residue it is . . .
I do believe it is time for you to taste
this is lovely
xxoo

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

6 posted 2003-10-08 05:33 PM

wow. u express urself so well. i'm wondering if that is ur true self or how u were feeling at the moment. either way u r awesome.

Meg-cheauvanistsshould be tortured mercilessly by being tied to a mast and listening to Sirens singing their sexual song

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