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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-10-04 07:47 AM

Space of Lace

I trickle down a web of space
Interlinked with rue and grace
Making theaters of my gleams
Lit upon the stage of dreams

Each emersion shares a bath
And I am happy with the path
Lying in my fields of clover
Each of which a glories nova

Happiness upon a stage
The dialogue a rhyming page
Spilling forth within the blue
And most of them are of you.

You are aurora’s borealis
The spirit haunts my aging palace.
You are the ghost my phantom weans
I bow before your grace my Queen.

And may I be your knight’s endeavor
A little while, perhaps forever.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2003-10-04 07:59 AM

Very nicely done Sy
Lovely metaphors creating images....

Love this idea..
"Making theaters of my gleams
Lit upon the stage of dreams"

Been there as many have...

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2003-10-04 08:17 AM

a nice dance thank you

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-10-04 08:52 AM

What a beautiful title, Seymour. Of
course, I love the poem, too.

Good Morning, my friend

Hugs to you

Ethel

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-10-04 09:19 AM

Sir Shakespeare of the New Millennium, your Queen is very fortunate to have a knight such as yourself in her court.

Old Willie himself would be impressed with thy sonnet!

EA

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-10-04 09:31 AM

What a beautiful morning read Sy!
Hot about tea with lemon today...
I have a terrible cold?
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-10-04 09:42 AM

ethome
Your comments are a pleasure to read.

wayoutwalt
I enjoy dancing. Thank you

Ethel,
My love top of the morning to ye.

Earth Angel
You have become my favorite Angel.

Nancy,
I'll be right over to have tea and hold your hand.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2003-10-04 10:29 AM

Lying in my fields of clover
Each of which a glories nova

Happiness upon a stage
The dialogue a rhyming page
Spilling forth within the blue
And most of them are of you.

You are aurora’s borealis
The spirit haunts my aging palace.
You are the ghost my phantom weans
I bow before your grace my Queen.

And may I be your knight’s endeavor
A little while, perhaps forever.
=====================================

Knights, Queens, and rhymes...
now all we need is a dragon.

Lying in my fields of clover
Each of which a glories nova
you do know how cool that couplet is right? *smile*

I do so love when you spill your heart and rhymes on the blue pages.

Heres a kiss for the King of way cool.

and some *winkiewinkies* too.

( got your note...glad you enjoyed the package)

"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold."
"So dawn goes down to day ...
Nothing gold can stay."

~Frost~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-10-04 10:40 AM

nice write

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

9 posted 2003-10-04 11:34 AM

"I trickle down a web of space
Interlinked with rue and grace
Making theaters of my gleams
Lit upon the stage of dreams"

Bravo!!

Always drink upstream from the herd.
-- Will Rogers

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-10-04 12:18 PM

JM,
Knights, Queens, and rhymes...
now all we need is a dragon.
But we have a Randy dragon.
WWRS

vandana
Thank you dear.

Miah,
Thank you for the bravo,

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-10-04 01:23 PM

wow!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-10-04 01:40 PM

passing,
Thanks for the WOW.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

13 posted 2003-10-04 01:55 PM

"Happiness upon a stage
The dialogue a rhyming page
Spilling forth within the blue
And most of them are of you.

Makes me miss MY moth...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2003-10-04 03:02 PM

Duncan,
Me too and thank you.

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