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Open Poetry #29

I Rose Early This Morn...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-10-03 11:16 PM

Still is the birth of an October morn,
When calm of dawn’s essence is once more reborn,
With a first hint of frost on window’s clear pane,
A slivered iced prism to dawning’s domain.

Sings meadowlark’s note from a dew-wetted lea,
Heralding serenity, serenading new day,
In the garden a whisper, of daybreak’s first breeze,
Cooling night’s shadows, caressing the trees.

I open the window to drink of the dawn,
To taste of the stillness of nighttime’s begone,
To savor tranquillity of a day yet not starting,
Within an October dawn, as nighttime is parting.

Sun’s first rays a glowing, the land’s scape encase
In the splendor of Autumn, in dawning’s embrace.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-10-03 11:39 PM

(smiles) Oh Tim, this is beautiful, sweet friend, there's nothing like an autumn morning right when the sun comes up and smelling the butterscotch and alderwood and alpine in the air! (big hugggsssssss) This is spellbinding, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-10-03 11:45 PM

"I open the window to drink of the dawn,
To taste of the stillness of nighttime’s begone,
To savor tranquillity of a day yet not starting,
Within an October dawn, as nighttime is parting.

Sun’s first rays a glowing, the land’s scape encase
In the splendor of Autumn, in dawning’s embrace."

Simply beautiful, Tim. I truly enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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