Open Poetry #29 |
No less, of what it was |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
It's no less of what it was as we stand in opposite corners in our new lives today it just means a little less to me and a little more in respect of how mis placed trust aged me years wiser face aginst the wall to think about what's done how could you have done that to us . . . |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Isn't it amazing how poetry reads us all so well. Love, Terri~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ohh gemma - hitting my heart this morning mis placed trust aged me years wiser face against the wall Goodness you dig right in and pull out things I had forgotten for a spell xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Gemma~ I know exactly what you mean... I was 5yrs old when I was taught that lesson.. "That which does not kill us makes us stronger" Some days that is just so hard to remember... love you! Susan |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
misplaced trust.. always ages us, but to misplace it is better than to lose it... without it, you can not truly love again... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ouch. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! I know this! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I ditto that ouch. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i third said ouch |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
mis placed trust aged me years wiser True that. A wonderful write gemjop fate is not just |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I think we all know this one...nice. Jason |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
powerful write. this one hit home hard. i think we all can relate. take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, it is so sad to see trust being imitated ever too uch, sweet friend, yet somehow it is important to understand the versimilitude of a trust so then we can understand how to love again and have a good idea to what is real trust! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Gem~WOW! This Kicks butt! Been here, done that! ~ARH |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"mis placed trust aged me years wiser" Oh my, Gemma...yes... I know this...and it hurts. Hugs to you... ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Gemma, this entire poem hits home... *big hugs* Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I don't know gem...and sorry I mised this first time round And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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