Open Poetry #29 |
Tears Of October |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tears Of October ~*Marge Tindal*~ The shedding comes I must spill it all These tears of October my cry of the Fall~ Memories of making in quiet heart quaking Freshness of raw intensity cries me again~ I reach for a smile but it eludes my grasp Tears in great numbers numb me at last~ They say it gets easier but what do they know Unless they've cried my tears they cannot say it's so~ I only ask for understanding a quiet place for the tears to flow These tears of October ... saline memories needing an outlet~ *Dedicated to the loving memories of my mother and my sister* Beverly W. Cowart Adams - March 31, 1925 - October 4, 1995 Sharon A. Cowart Ricker - March 8, 1944 - October 7, 1999 ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful memorial verse Marge. ~Heart Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely poem..beautiful picture. M |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
My October is filled with tears....not many of mine....but of others close to me....nice write gal.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...October is filled for me too, the birthtime of my mother and Michelle...my heart is with you in understanding. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The shedding comes I must spill it all These tears of October my cry of the Fall~ Memories of making in quiet heart quaking Freshness of raw intensity cries me again~" understanding.... knowing |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deeply touching words, dear Marge. Love, Margherita |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"They say it gets easier but what do they know Unless they've cried my tears they cannot say it's so~" Now, I must reflect..Strong words.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge, my friend~ You know that I feel this...and understand. Love you, ~Me When the power of love overcomes the |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've written your heart so beautifully... Hugs, my friend. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I have beautiful hauntingly memories of OCT and fall....lovely, lovely....Marge... Lauren~ The way you move me |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marge, this hit so hard for me. my mom died Oct 1, so I know the pain you are feeling. I am so sorry for your loss. I also wanted to tell you my bday is also March 31st. You are in my thoughts during this very difficult time. Take care. Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so pretty & I can feel your pain through your words. Love, Betty |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
...because today is a 'remember' day. When the power of love overcomes the |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"I reach for a smile but it eludes my grasp Tears in great numbers numb me at last~" I like that you're good! Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My deep appreciation to each of you for letting me share these tears-in-fall~ Shortly I will go to see my little Delaney and get the *hugs* and *smiles* that I need on this day~ Thank you all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...This is so tenderly written from your heart. One that I will keep near forever...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...A most beautiful and loving remembrance of two dear ones who have passed this way. Such wonderful love coming through in every word. May God comfort you and bring you His peace. ****Ivy Rose |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Marge, this is beautiful and my blessings to you They are proud, I know this xxoo |
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