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Suffer My Heart
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Suffer My Heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Suffer My Heart It breaks my heart to find me and her so far apart. I miss her tenderness. I miss the thrill of her passionate kiss. Without her I must go on, a broken heart, my choices my desires all but gone. Live my life the best I can. Suffer my heart to understand. JamesLee October02 2003 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
you expressed this very well,,,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, A sad write, but well expressed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very bittersweet, and yet a hint of understanding and awareness, something unfortunately we all must face in life, the realization of ourselves, thoughts, words and deeds. Thank you for sharing  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James you have just inspired me Suffer my heart to understand. God, what a bittersweet line . . . the heart doesnt though, does it? not right away , maybe never it just kind of forgets (cardiac amnesia) *smile* Beautiful writing xxoo |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
 Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
James~ I don't get it either...understanding is unreachable it seems at times. Nicely done.. Susan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ You write the ache so tenderly~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
 I know the feeling |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bittersweet ache James.. Well said...well said indeed. ~Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Suffer my heart to understand. so you are the one to inspire lw... a wonderful last line, JamesM hugss M |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
it really expresses your feelings but i think that there could be more to it. But hey it's ur poem so take my advice if u wnat but if u don't don't |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderful inspire, and cardiac amnesia...couldn't we all use some? Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, you have suffered way too much and I trul mean it when I say you will find all your heart desires as woen who truly know what love is could not ask for anything more than a golden heart like yours! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
James~ Hope your heart heals with time! very painful poem reminds me of the "Lonely Hearts Club" Thanks for your words~ARH |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah...so this is where Sue found her inspiration...and I can see why. You've penned the hurt beautifully, James.  And, Sue?...'cardiac amnesia'... I love that...smile. When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (10-04-2003 02:26 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
James A wonderful title and a wonderful write. So well put! Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
James...Enjoyed the tenderness and saddness in this well written poem...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, this is so sad. But I love the beautiful way that you wrote it.  Hugs Ethel |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
Unfortunately, we don't choose love, love chooses us, and for us. "The greatest gift a father can give to his daughter is to love her mother." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm sorry that your heart is suffering, Dear James. Loving hugs, EA |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
James this aches < but is written with only the tenderness that you can give it.May your hearet heal soon and flourish with the love it so deserves. Crystal |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
so well expressed arthur |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
James, this is so sad...  I really love the last 2 lines..."Live my life the best I can Suffer my heart to understand" _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A sad but truthful and wise write. Jason |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Carry on we must! I think you speak for many James. Lovely heartbreaker of a poem you wrote. |
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