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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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I want to rise with the steam of a hot bath, it makes me forget about you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hmmm, I like...very much. Maree  fate is not just |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
quiet and peacefull...and sad...all at the same time. Thanks, Larry |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, quite consuming and very resourceful...stimulating the mind...good one and good morning  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Meg, this is beautiful God, you know it is in the bath I do my remembering and forgetting You have described this perfectly yes, rise and dissipate . . . leave me be . . . Beautiful writing truly I adore this xxoo |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'd love to be your bath....I envy the water's ability to touch you totally. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I want to rise with the steam of a hot bath, it makes me forget about you. no that would make me want him to jump back in with me into the steam of desire.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kaoru, I too have had moments like that. You described it simply--but ever so aptly...  EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Meg~ A bath can be so soothing... (and lock the door next time, I think Toe might try to get in) Susan |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Perfect. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep...sometimes that works |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Meghan, I can feel some tears deep in this, sweet friend, sometimes we just have to let it all evaporate because it hurts to just be left as a handprint on a steamed mirror! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Kaoru,this sounds so relaxing. Thank You for sharing. B T W, it goes with Serenity's challenge too. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Yup, self indulgence will do that, and how better than a steamy soothe. I see that you do shorter poems well, too. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oooo! ~ and what a pleasant way to do it!  EA |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
do i tell you enough that i love how you write? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
perfect #okay so Mike took my perfect..thanks mike..how about flawless then [This message has been edited by Aenimal (10-29-2003 08:43 PM).] |
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