why the white is so vulnerable?

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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-03 02:55 AM

street castle glows. red. white.
continents flash through a touch of immortality.
breaking the black sky two lights
fight for a space of one.
please, touch the hand and find the face
it belongs to. before it's now.
psychedelic world is not real
under the circumstances of white.
circus travels. place your bet
on the color of reality.
thirteen hours of black and white movies
gliding among touches of rouge. zebras swim in an ocean
crossing by the place where is less.
and a world bumps into thousand clowns.
hold the hand.
recognition between awake and chronic insomnia.
caffeine smells funny in the brain.
the hand awaits.
chameleon is multi-colored in the dark
when can't be seen. rainbow pollutes the moon.
why the white
is so vulnerable?

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-10-03 03:00 AM

Wow, I'm truely in awe..

Wonderful write, friend..

And welcome to PIP!

pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

2 posted 2003-10-03 03:09 AM

thanx Kaoru,

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2003-10-03 03:12 AM

My real thoughts..hrmm...it's nice to see words like this come alive..enjoyed it to the very last drop....Welcome

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-03 03:43 AM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Petre, this is such a deeply heartfelt debut, sweet friend, the white is so vulnerable and the night is no place for rainbows as they must guide the children in the day and the bright lights hone to children at night! This is powerful, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Petre, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your scintillating poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special geeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-14 02:00 AM

dang...this is awesome

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2003-11-16 12:57 PM

this is sweet....

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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