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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-16 09:58 AM



I have A Story To Tell (Give me an ending)

The woman lives far back
into the hills of Kentucky.
Holes splitting her shoes,
colorful patches upon her dress.
Hair of golden brown,
skin like the morning dew.
One day a friend comes passing by.
This friend of long ago,
now rich with silver and gold.
This friend saying,“Hello Fair Lady
I have come to take you to a concert to see
The Entertainer.”
Fair Lady filled with excitement-
Dreams of seeing
The Entertainer.
To the concert hall they go-
Her wearing her new finery,
a dress of creamy chiffon
And a bag lined with gold.
Her eyes aglow,
The Entertainer walks upon the stage-
Guitar in hand,
he begins to sing a haunting melody.
He leaves center stage,
walks towards the audience-
He stops in front of Fair Lady and sings his melody.
Her heart is beating loudly hoping no one will hear
He reaches out, kisses her hand,
leading her to the stage.
Fair Lady knees shake in surprise-
Her face a blossoming shade of pink.
He leads her to a chair, helps her sit
Continues his melody of yesterday
Singing gently only to Fair Lady.
As the lights dim he whispers low-
'Beautiful Lady come to my suite
So we can make sweet harmony'.
Fair Lady bedazzled by
The Entertainer
Takes his hand, walks to the limousine.
Now all you readers how will this end?
What will happen to Fair Lady
And The Entertainer?

Love Bon-Bon

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Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
1 posted 2003-11-16 11:03 AM


As the driving car turned arround the corner
The fair lady told with her soften voice why why ?
Once upon a time it was only me with this golden glimt !
the luck has joined or has it please stop please stop....
Said the fairless lady and told the entertainer now you dress as i were dressed
as the fair lady.
If it is really real your love will not stop with a deal, but getting back to normallity were we and true love is setled.

So once upon a time -----> Their love did hold forever and more...

Smile

Jes

P.s. its hard for me sometimes to find the matching words so i hope this was ok. It was fun to try, but i think i need alot more practise on this one lol.


Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
2 posted 2003-11-16 12:00 PM


Good jobber Jes
It is fun to try to give ending making up as you go.
Glad you enjoyed my silliness.
Love Bon-Bon

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
3 posted 2003-11-16 12:53 PM


Having put a few years into the music business I got stuck on Randy Newman:

"They say that money
can't buy love in this world,
but it'll get you a half-pound of cocaine
and a sixteen year old girl
and a great big long limousine
on a hot September night,
now that may not be love
but it's all right."

Sorry, I can't get any further.  I do like what you wrote though.

Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
4 posted 2003-11-16 01:05 PM


Thanks Ice for  the input. For sure, for sure money cannot buy love.
See Ya
Love Bon-Bon

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