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Open Poetry #29
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strings0305
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since 2003-10-01
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0 posted 2003-10-03 02:12 AM

off hand

so (again I can't
there(feel my fingers
you are (numb.

peeling,
scraping,
loose skin off loose palms
off loose elbows
off loose arms

sagging,
hanging,
loose flesh off loose bones
off loose bodies
off loose souls

so (but still
are(again and
you(cold fingers
there?
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-10-03 02:15 AM

Interesting, and well done. Enjoyed.
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