Open Poetry #29 |
I sense You |
SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I sense you, on some midnight train. Thinking of love, wondering will you lose your pain? Not wringing your hands, but still missing something. My paths steps come near to you. Somehow this place in time was meant to be. God knew since a little girl, Well maybe it was I knew him. He's always been ever present, but now through pain I can't define. Because it wasn't mine to bare. I don't know where I am. But I feel the fear, with you near me, will subside. Somehow I always wanted a man to be my guide. Read to me, tell me history even if it seems to be trivial. It never seems to be, to me. Read me till I sleep, But no fear on waking, you'll be gone. That's how I will know that midnight train was the way I was supposed to go. Find my shine in you, and you'll think that's just fine! You will think of me, and know I want for you what is grand. Maybe? Just maybe, this is God's plan. Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is Gods plan and the sense you feel is returned.You will share this wonderful plan and flourish together. Crystal |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Hugging you... Thanks for that. I needed to hear those words. But I do believe. Love, Terri~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Terri, I really like this poem. It has a peaceful feeling to it. Hugs Ethel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you Ethel...You are sweet. When I wrote this it was comforting. Love, Terri~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
expressions well penned,,,
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you Q. Bless ya bunches. Love, Terri~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Beautiful, my friend, and I love the thought of there being a master plan when it comes to the loves in our lives! Much enjoyed!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Very well out together Terri. I can see the thought that went into this one. It is quite peaceful in content and I needed that this morning. Thanks! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SharaRose Enjoyed the read. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Shara~ Enjoyed this very much!! Susan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Shara, this is lovely, sweet friend, if you wish someone happiness, that someone will do unto you too, as that is one true belief He lays before us all! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this and am so happy to be back, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Terri, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Pretty nice...James |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I am so sorry it took me so long to get a thank you to all of you. Hugs and Love to all. Sunnyone--I don't what it is, but God has always been in the back of mind in all that I do as far back and I can remember. He was always there. It was me that wouldn't listen to Him for what He had planned for me and my life. I hate how cliche' that sounds, but it's just how I feel. Thanks for your words. EvocativeVerse2--Thank you so much for this comment. This touched me because it touched your morning. Much appreciated your words!! Seymour Tabin--Thank you so much Seymour. I appreciate your kind words. Susan Caldwell--I am so glad you enjoyed. Much appreciated. Noah--Ah, there you are Noah. You have been missed. Thank you for reading and the comment. James Micheal-- I am glad you liked. Much appreciated. and Terri~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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