Open Poetry #29 |
The Wind Changes (response to Marge Tindal's |
Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
The Wind Changes The thunder of an empty sky, Sent my heart racing back, To find your open arms, And found only a memory. The lightning came late, But did not linger in the air. It barely lit the ground, Below my feet where I would walk. The air is calm now. There is no excitement left, In the retreating storm, No music left in the rain. The wind changes.... And the breeze threatens, To lift me from the ground. I hold my breath in fear. Through the steady beat, Of the pouring rain, I hear voices call my name They whisper into the air, "Fly once more around the night. There is yet another moon to find. You are not alone, you are light, And someone waits for you to shine". Sherry Gardner Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (10-10-2003 05:10 AM).] |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Very nice write,and the description is great Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Thanks Julie.... I appreciate your compliments. (((hugs))) Sherry |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sherry~ Oh my, how elegantly touching~ This is such a compliment to even think that something I wrote would inspire someone to reach within and pen as touching as this~ "Fly once more around the night. There is yet another moon to find. You are not alone, you are light, And someone waits for you to shine". Yes, you have felt the Wind Weep ... and written it so well~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...how beautiful is this! So good to read you here again m'friend. Hope all is well at your house..miss ya! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sherry, I hope this is not just a teaser! Please say you are back with us to stay! I felt the beauty of your words in my very soul. You have been sorely missed, dear friend! Loving hugs, Linda |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Thank you Marge, you must know the truth, I wrote this originally about 13 years ago but when i read your poem, it was the first thing I thought of. They seemed to go together. Hi, Nancy, thank you, I miss you too, I don't know how long I will be lingering here... looking for a job is a full time job. Hello, Linda, I miss this place too and I have been trying to get in here more often. Thank you for your heartfelt comments. With friends like you all, How could I stay away?!?!? Love you all, Sherry |
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