Open Poetry #29 |
Deepest of Feelings |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Deepest of Feelings A moment has passed, though seems more like an eternity From out of her thoughts she comes, realising what she has to do to be free The confusion had threatened to consume her, but she deserves more She realises in that instant, she must begin to open the next door Stepping out into light, after being in the dark for so long She looks around to finally realise she is "home" Home...what a sweet name, it's where her heart and soul will stay While the rest of her pain and heartache, will fly far away She never allowed someone to truly love her, though you'd never guess at first glance Always the one giving others a second, third, fourth, then final chance Holding it all inside, the pain that she has felt since being a small girl She realises now it doesn't have to be anymore, it is no longer a part of her world She tosses it to the sea, let the angry ocean waves disolve her pain at last Looking towards her future now, she feels her heart smiling, moving farther from the past The ocean churning with the water, it carries her secret to another land For today when she let it all go, there she found her love, with an outstreched hand Her "sea" now seems calmer, the waves just rolling with the tide No longer from herself will she run, there's no more reasons to hide Then though in a distant, she sees a dark and stormy cloud with rain That is where it went, all her confusion and all the pain If she truly keeps her heart free though, and lets the one she loves in her heart Together they will be able to make that beautiful start Hopefully she chooses the right path, because I can't watch her hurt any longer I pray she continues to fight, and in the end comes out of it stronger "love is like a butterfly-- if you chase it, it will surely fly away,instead hold it close and watch it grow into something beautiful" ~me~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (10-02-2003 08:32 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Amy, I certainly hope this person you are speaking of keeps perservering and following her heart, sweet friend, I understand this anguish so well and know we all support you and your loved ones! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awesome write all the way!! Great one Amy Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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taz08141971 New Member
since 2003-10-01
Posts 2Mrytle Beach,SC |
AMY, I CAN'T SPEAK FOR EVRYONE IN HERE BUT I WILL SAY YOUR POEMS HAVE TOUCHED A PART OF MY HEART, I CAN TELL YOU WRITE FROM YOUR HEART AND THAT IS SOMETHING SPECIAL, DON'T EVER CHANGE.I COULD ALMOST FEEL WHAT YOU WERE SAYING ABOUT HER IN THE POEM. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
May she choose to make that start to a lifetime of happiness.Excellently penned. Crystal |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for your beautiful replies. as always, means so much to me. take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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