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Windy Walking
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Windy Walking |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112
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We walk in chill winds. Almost touching yet without, Wanting to be held My hearts begs of me to shout Propriety holds Remain so close and distant Want to speak and silent, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lotus, we've missed you... and this poem, seems to be left wanting... as if it were an unfinished song... waiting for another voice there, in the silence... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice.... |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
Sunshine you sweet, storm make me miss much, work more You write me next verse? Cpat is kind in praise |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is something beautiful.. |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
Kaoru is kind |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I've always found walking in the wind to be so serene and relaxing and youthful, sweet friend, sometimes it's best not to hear what is said and simply admire the wind caressing your ears! God Bless You, sweet friend, I enjoy this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
What was hope for was warm breath, got chilly wind, but Mr. Noah very right should be happy just to be walking with him and enjoy company. You very kind and wise. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Your writing shows talent and insight Enjoyed the poem as the walk Gloom |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
The Teacher honors me with comment |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lotus, I have uploaded your photo. It will begin to show up soon. We all enjoy your poetry and comments. I hope the weather behaves, and we see more of your lovely work. |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
You are kindness, Bright light kind and help me great, Mostly I read, my words still need more helping to be proper |
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