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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-10-02 05:26 PM

I have not held you,
counting the hours.

I have not kissed you,
I think as a child.

And so echos my santuary,
my cathedral made
of glossy glass and pain.

I have made these words for you,
screamed them all in vain.

For soon it will be,
that I should see you again.

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (10-03-2003 03:02 AM).]

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-10-02 05:29 PM

no meg...your poetry...is a window...helen

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-10-02 05:35 PM

expressed well,,,,,

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-10-02 05:35 PM

your poetry...is a broken window...a little more dark and inspirational

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-10-02 05:36 PM

Meg, I agree, your poetry is a window,
which you polish each time you write.

There is nothing wrong with your poetry. It
speaks clearly.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-10-02 05:38 PM

(big hugggsssssss) No, your poetry is a stained glass window, that even when fractured gleams the prism light and displays an icon or picture not forgotten! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send comfort hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2003-10-02 05:45 PM

*hug*

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-10-03 12:22 PM

Your desperate prism breaks the light so clean that every color seems white.

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angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

8 posted 2003-10-03 12:26 PM

I have to agree with the others here.Your words are a window, that right now seems to be darker, but it is within your words that I find the truth that so many hide.Continue to share your window of knowledge.

Crystal

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2003-10-03 12:02 PM

To me your words are the water held in containment of a sponge..

when I need to know that I am not alone..I tip my head back and squeeze the water into my mouth...

Thank you for allowing that.

Susan

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-10-03 12:11 PM

I feel this too at times

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