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jasonm
New Member

since 2003-10-01

Posts 8

0 posted 2003-10-01 11:09 AM

Conflicted echos shall our ruins sound
when, cracked amongst the footed roots of trees,
by chance unearthed, they’re puzzled from the ground.
Resurrection may elicit sympathy.
A tear may fall where ash of Rome abound.
But what deft hand to stitch the binding tie,
a tender patchworkd recollect of struggle:
the grounded knee, the smiling, favored child,
the honeyed tongue, the neck, the rope, the rafter.
Pieced from matchstick bones of Babel:
ignominy, the surge of crowds, disaster
faced, or fled from, chronicled in rhyme.
When paper fails, the poets dead and after:
king and fool, orphan, widow, lime.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-10-01 11:18 AM

Amazing work, and a brilliant entrance, if I do say so myself.

Welcome to PIP, enjoy your stay.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-01 11:19 AM

Jason, Sir, Welcome to Passions! I have a hard time with sonnets, as I can never get the meter quite right, but it looks to me as if you've done a fair job...please, as you get to know us, make yourself welcome in the Poetry Workshop...we have some sonnet Kings and Queens in there that love to share...

Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-10-01 11:30 AM

(smiles) Yay! I too am not that into form ut I do love sonnets and this is such a gorgeous debut of one, your artistic heart graces us all, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jason, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2003-10-02 10:43 PM

Welcome to passions! Great Write, I love sonnets!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

5 posted 2003-10-02 11:21 PM

Goodness... a great way to start! Wonderful write and welcome!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-10-03 12:25 PM

Excellent! Starting now, I read every word you post.

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angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-10-03 12:30 PM

Welcome to Passions.I can see you will be among the greats here.This was absolutely wonderful and show the deoth to your talent.

Crystal

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