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Love Letters...for ed and susie
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Love Letters...for ed and susie |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Love Letters in my wait I found you in poetry my very breath spoke your name and echoed between my heart’s lullaby in strongest beat skin never before ached this until letters created a romance in song hands once clinched found them open and wrapping another’s then and only then did I know no part of me unfulfilled once a language of longing so vastly hollow forever now to be gone and now new words find me walking unknown steps and no night shall find me without you "wish your room had room for two" John Mayer |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Such lovely words! Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done, Helen M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful way to honor the passionate love affair of Ed and Sue. Thanks! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen...this is lovely! |
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prwohl New Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 2WY, USA |
Beautiful words! Live life to the fullest! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely Helen! ~Hugs~ ~ Autumn..the year's last, loveliest |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ah Geez, Helen! This is beautiful! (And yes, "language" sometimes fails us, no?) Thank you, so much, for this very sweet thought.....written! Hugs, friend Ed |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
You have worded this perfectly. Ed is my older brother and I love seeing his talent noticed. You are one beautiful writer. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds like something that should be kept in case there ever be any type of ceremonious reason to have it read aloud.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Helen, this is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, love letters are always so magical and feel like some special someone is half-there as handwriting is golden and poetry in ink creates song! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen? My God . . . this is utterly beautiful and passion bounding YOU My Lady are one fine poetess As I sit here and read I cannot believe I am so blessed as to have a friend to write beauty from her hand meeting my eye in love and life words . . . felt within my heart on these pages to your eyes which see far beneath the surface life begging her to ride to fly to swim freeform among the waves which bide her time a watchful eye the ocean embraces her sweet soul inside of her resides the elements of Earth as they once were forged from unforeseen hands to lie in wait and awake to the morning of the Lady standing cool waters rush barefoot in her purity feet and toes melting sand castle sweet breeze upon cheek she smiles upon me and my love within her own wondering wanting and wishing within her a fire burns bright fuel to flame flame to hand hand to mouth and eyes which shine Helen, thank you so very much for this and you a beautiful soul I am a happy woman and this has made my chest fill with life . . . *smiling HUGE* a beautiful woman indeed So selfless . . . thank you Sue xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-02-2003 03:16 PM).] |
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