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A Man's Desire (gents, feel free to add...)
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A Man's Desire (gents, feel free to add...) |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
A Man's Desire I want her upper lip, the one that curls and morphs slightly as she sings, fleshy and full, it is ripe, and how will it look and feel put to other use... I want the bit of the back of heR right thigh, the part that is slightly paler, and rarely exposed, teasing, showing only when the wind lifts her skirt; that which gets goose bumps from hot eyes... Her eyebrows are my desire in their golden laurel set, soft accents to washed pink skin, matching the straight simple hair the flows behind; the impression of delicate wool and feminine gentleness... I demand the slight slip of skin beneath a blouse and bra, honestly insensitive to hEr seemingly innocent affect, my mouth goes dry anticipating the next move, she must know, such torture must be deliberate... she has eyes like the sun, beautiful, yet painful and frank in their glare, I look and am burned, touched, scarred, forever more to carry her harsh embrace... I want the second to smallest toe on the right foot, She wears a ring on it, curled silver trinket; simple and rustic it deceives - masking the intricacies of her mind and soul... The curve of the left ankle on which sits an anklet; does sHe know their meaning and purpose? I would take that piece and have it dance, The rest of her might than watch and learn... shE flaunts the curve of her hips unconcealed, damn the new fashions and their sadistic designers! I want the arc off which the light reflects fuzz, that yielding flesh so tantalizingly presented... ----------------------------------------- gents, feel free to add your own... -majnu |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
There is nothing to add here majnu, you have said it for us all! This, by the way, is the best you've written. (My own humble opinon) Well done, well said! ~wranx |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
I know this girl! Or wish I did. You make her truely lovely. Very nice. Larry. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
wowwwwwwwweeeeeeeee. whats to add? i certainly couldn't you truly have said it all. MAGNIFICENT write, appreciated by a Lady. adding to library ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
REHE no secret message eh?? Great writng very sensuous! Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
thanks for the comments. wranx, yho is certainly relevant. ethome, nothing so trite as putting the letters together. but notice that each her and she is different.  -majnu |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As a woman, hearing words such as these stir the passions within... You are a man who knows how to appreciate--and undoubtedly satisfy--every facet of a woman's being. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-02-2003 02:54 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Zaheer, I think you summarized it up nicely, sweet friend, my own desire is to make my love feel happy, faithful, and be honest to her the best I can, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Zaheer, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Are you sure that's a ring on her toe or me?.....nice write |
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