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Fade to Light - Duet - Serenity's challenge
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Fade to Light - Duet - Serenity's challenge |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Fade to Light - Duet The hollow of resonance spacious, warm closes me in Dark, inviting Welcoming the slow down feel Come, sit, tell me All Speak to that which holds you still Say those things that you have not Watch as darkness Dissipates… into the warm, of love. Then hold, that you might be held To cry, that I might tear, Then sing, that we should take wing to heights as never before... ~*~ Tipping my hat to Wranx...thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A lovely write,  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I feel a very soft warm light glowing from my PC.  tipping my hat to you two |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God this is beautiful . . . Is this the duet? where is that thing hiding if it isnt? hold, that you might be held To cry, that I might tear, Then sing, that we should take wing to heights as never before... absolutely breathtaking you guys *smile* xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful duet you two! Another 'duet challenge' well met. ~Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A wondermous collaboration by two of my favourites. Maree  fate is not just |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful!! Eric |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..well done indeed! I believe my request...so thank you both!! you do this well together..and blend the style and the images with seeming ease... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You're so very welcome lady Sunshine, t'was my pleasure. And thanks to you Ron, for suggesting this. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea and Ed...this is simply beautiful... A wonderful collaboration, you two. Hugs to you both...  When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (10-02-2003 01:59 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent weaving of minds |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Karilea and Wranx, this was such a wonderful collaborative effort, sweet friends, if one is going to fade, at least let it be in complete light! (big hugggsssssss) This challenge is absolutely "enlightening", God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Wranx and Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Say those things that you have not Watch as darkness Dissipates… into the warm, of love. Then hold, that you might be held ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The slow down feel says it all, and that verse...oh sigh~ Karilea, and warnx~ Loved the motion and emotions, and the feelings you left me with. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
ok |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
a beautiful meeting of minds |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Oh Sunshine this is a lovely piece. Now how did I miss it earlier? Oh yeah...it is the 10 hour days/6 days a week I have been working lately! (Snicker!) Back to the top of the list this goes at once! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
excellent weave of words you two! very well done. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awesome write...it was as if you were speaking to the poets, inviting |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Don't know how I missed this the first time around. Excellent write you two!!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written in warmingly effects |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nice... nice... nice... now I know what I have been missing the last week and a bit... good flowing poetry... regards sudhir |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This has a glow and a flow that warms the heart. Crystal |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Once again another great write. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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