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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-11-20 10:47 AM



. . . and one day it happened . . .

since birth I wandered
dusty expanse
searching
for God
only to find

Him

I traveled onward . . .

forging through life
half-baked philosophy
misunderstood I
felt so . . .

lost

within myself then this

happened

I didn't ask for it
nor plan for it
but I am here, now
finally

and only now
am I able to place
that missing piece
a puzzle began
as a child
setting it

ohhh so softly

just right there


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please see her beautiful write
that inspired me so:
/pip/Forum82/HTML/003305.html


Thank you Ethel
LittleOne
xxoo



[This message has been edited by littlewing (11-20-2003 11:05 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-20 11:17 AM


"and only now
am I able to place
that missing piece
a puzzle began
as a child
setting it

ohhh so softly

just right there"


Beautiful Sue...
This left me in tears...for my own personal reasons.
Hugs YOU!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-11-20 11:23 AM


well done
Nightshade
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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-11-20 12:25 PM


This is precious, and going into my library. hugs to you sweet poetess, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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4 posted 2003-11-20 12:36 PM


Sue, to read your inspiring words is to know that you have, indeed, found the last piece to that proverbial puzzle.

Love & Light,
Linda

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5 posted 2003-11-20 01:06 PM


this is incredible...gawd...incredible!
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6 posted 2003-11-20 04:34 PM


Now, see what you did, Sue?? You made me cry  again.......but LittleOne, you  do  understand that these are happy and thankful tears. Tears for all four of us...you and Ed, and me and Gary. We are so blessed to have found what so many people are still searching for....true and real love.
Thanks you, sweet friend.
With hugs and love,  
Ethel

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-11-20 04:36 PM


You do know that I'm keeping this, don't you??
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8 posted 2003-11-20 04:42 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too read Ethel's gorgeous post and I believe only with Him can we find the authentic answers, and it doesn't matter what THEY think, but what God thinks, and we follow our hearts there! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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9 posted 2003-11-20 07:01 PM


Ooh.....perfect....makes me want to read it in a whisper.....

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10 posted 2003-11-21 02:06 AM


Littlewingster

You have writ a lovely charm, indeed.  A pleasure to read.  

[This message has been edited by Essorant (11-21-2003 06:47 AM).]

wranx
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11 posted 2003-11-21 02:08 PM


Susie? I think I've seen this before.

I'm happy that it stands alone now.

Love ya, gal

"In looking Northward, I see a light"


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12 posted 2003-11-21 02:22 PM


Hi littlewing. BUMP! Back to the top this goes. It is a marvelous piece and you just write poems in this style oh so well! I can try to mimic you...but you are the master. I am glad I got a chance to read this today! Have a great weekend...see you all Monday! MAYBE! (Snicker!)

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

angelblueyes
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13 posted 2003-11-21 03:57 PM


This is simply amazing, bringing tears of joy.
Crystal

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14 posted 2003-11-21 06:50 PM


enjoyed
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