Open Poetry #29 |
September's Daughter - Happy Birthday, Martie |
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
September's Daughter --Sedona, Arizona in the Fall - Webshots-- As Summer breathes a sigh of 'time to go' September's canvas, painted near complete Awaits the final stroke of brush in flow In finish of a masterpiece replete A dance of golden brown and orange hues In puddle splash of Autumn's palette fair Adorns a backdropped sky in deepest blues Creating Nature's art beyond compare A splendor such as this may rare exist Yet there is one who's beauty doth outshine Her words in flow are surely spirit kissed Pure poetry and art in intertwine September's daughter birthed in Summer's leave Perfection of chef-d'oeuvre in Autumn's weave ~Vicky L. Raynes Happy Birthday, Martie. Love you much. When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-22-2003 08:59 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice wishes,,,,
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Absolutely beautiful, Vicky. What a wonderful tribute. I love your unstrained rhyme scheme, and excellent verbage. Hats off to you, milady. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a beautiful Birthday gift, Vicky! Martie will love it! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ It's simply beautemous~ May I add a shortie ? MartieSis~ A very Happy Birthday wish is sent your way this morn Meant to lift your spirit and your day adorn~ You are the bestest Sis ever sent my way So with love ... lots of love I wish for you a HAPPY day~ *Morning Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhhh this is a beautiful birthday gift Vicky HAPPY BIRTHDAY Martie Hope you're home before lunch time. and a Maree. fate is not just |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh what a wonderful gift Vicky! Martie will absolutely love it! Beautifully penned dear lady. *Happy Birthday Martie!* ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes Martie will love it, excellent. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Vicky, This was beautiful and so sweet! Happy Birthday Martie! Susan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This lovely poem will undoubtedly add to Martie's sparkle! Absolutely beautiful! ~ and Martie, have a happy, happy birthday! May this coming year be filled with joy, vibrant good health and prosperity! Big, birthday hugs, Linda |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful Vicky, as they always are what a beautiful soul you are and Martie? HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! This is a nice morning smile thank you xxoo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...Look at the treasure I found gift wrapped in my favorite thing....words! Thank you, dear friend, for this poem. It shows how very special you are! Thanks too to all who replied with birthday wishes, and Marge...for the poem within the poem. Hugs to everyone! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sedona....perfect backdrop for a poem of a lady who is as much -- and maybe more -- spirit than reality. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
My my, A wonderful gift Vic. Beauty for a beauty...How fitting, this. Happy Birthday Martie!!! Ed |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is just a beautiful gift vicky...happy day martie!!!...h |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As Summer breathes a sigh of 'time to go' September's canvas, painted near complete Awaits the final stroke of brush in flow In finish of a masterpiece replete A dance of golden brown and orange hues In puddle splash of Autumn's palette fair Adorns a backdropped sky in deepest blues Creating Nature's art beyond compare ======================= Such a beautiful sharing of your rhymes and heart.... this is so lovely Vicky-girl... Hallmark has got nothing on you. "If you feel heartbreak, distant thunder, lightning, earthquakes ... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(does happy birthday dance) Yay! Oh Vicky, Martie is truly everyone's friend and she is a daughter of every season, sweet friend, this is a most gorgeous tribute to her as Martie will always be our flower girl with so many colorful visions and love to share! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, Happy Birthday Martie and God Bless You Both, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful write Vicky, Happy birthday Martie! Jason |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Vicky, this is beautiful... Happy Birthday Martie!!!! Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very beautifully penned for a friend on her birthday... hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Happy Day Martie..... Beautiful poem Vicky..... HUGSSSSx2 Lauren |
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