Open Poetry #29 |
sitting in the mine, lacking evolutional advantages |
pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
tunnel. walls of crashing inwards. hands on eyes not to be exiled. my shadow (left me) dwell in isolation. i'm still here. groping my way stepping over heads and whole bodies rummage something i don't remember having or ever stolen. scream cut through scare... i lack reach. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
i gadda stop for tonite. obviously i seems to wear my stupid head |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Good write. Don't be so hard on your work. too many people worry about the perfect post, post what you feel and post freely. there is an edit button and archives where you can go back and revise or revisit poems another day. if you feel the need. at the moment worry about release and the growth will come |
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