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Aimster
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0 posted 2003-10-01 09:34 PM




Lightning Strikes

Lightning strikes, it has touched my heart
Without a warning, this love got a start
Electrifying, it sparks me deep inside
Never my true feelings will I hide

Lightning strikes, deep down to the core
In you, I honestly couldn't ask for more
You know how I feel, and you feel the same
I know that for us this isn't a game

Lightning strikes, the heat we both can feel
I'd never imagined a love could be this real
No time nor distance could ever pull us apart
Now that lightning has striked a match in both our hearts

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

© Copyright 2003 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-10-01 10:01 PM


No time nor distance could ever pull us apart
Now that lightning has striked a match in both our hearts


very good thoughts  and read,,,

                                                                   

taz08141971
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since 2003-10-01
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2 posted 2003-10-01 10:31 PM


you have touched me with your poems, when i read them i can tell they are from your heart
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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3 posted 2003-10-01 10:32 PM


This is great.You show such power, strength, and determination that it makes the heart smile.
Crystal

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4 posted 2004-05-16 09:00 PM


ooooooooo! that's awesome!
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