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Open Poetry #29

Absent Minded Moon

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-01 06:49 AM

Absent Minded Moon

absent minded
he was a day dream
talking of things that
escaped me in sleep
telling me of a castle
built upon velvet
a reverie with beauty
on moon shined mountains
a true lullaby away
from the dark side
the very last point on
the edge of night
a long tall sweet drink
explored stirred in stars

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-01 06:53 AM

IWIHWT...I really do.
I'm enjoying the imagery...
well done, Helen!

Darren
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since 2003-09-30

Posts 30

2 posted 2003-10-01 07:51 PM

I love your words
and the things that you say
they touched and hugged me
and sparkled my day

I wish I could elaborate
for I feel it my duty
but these words have weakened me
i'm humbled by their beauty

Thank you Helen.

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-10-01 08:31 PM

Hmmmmm....sounds dangerous...or dangerously good...if you meet this one again, we want a full report!

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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-10-01 09:28 PM

you are amazing red

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-16 08:59 PM

amazing yes!

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