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You are twin to the Ocean, love
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You are twin to the Ocean, love |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Eyes speak of cloudburst as they move over mine all that waits behind them intent to warm with gaze pockets of gold laughter fills penniless fortune Chocolate tastes molten brown to match the curl of your hair falling in tamed waves over unkissed brow silk upon lip ~ I linger Something as wild unpredictable twin to love You remind me of the ocean The way she made me fall in love with her Fascination pulls magnetic me to her soft floors of ocean I never trusted her each forceful layer of free water but she tricks into submission and I don't mind may she wear upon my aura shell do her worst I never wanted to fall in love with you She will not let me drink and if I do claims me chokes me 'til I drown Sipping your eyes let me look away before you claim mine and I yours. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written as always, very much enjoyed this read. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
bravo Gemma! VERY nice..... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... wow .... ...W O W ... ... drowning here!! *S |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Sipping your eyes let me look away before you claim mine and I yours." Beautiful!! Oh so softly sensual! LOVE THIS!!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop Well done enjoyed the read. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God gem . . . this made me tear up what a masterpiece ohh to compare this with the ocean just brilliant and you missy are blazing yourself quite nicely This is perfection just ultimate bittersweet xxoo |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
ohh my. this reall speaks to me. you hurt me so much And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gemma~ There is a beautifully gentle muse guiding your word-thoughts gal~ Thank you for letting her speak~ This is lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I never wanted to fall in love with you" I understand that feeling completly.  Susan |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very beautiful piece. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You remind me of the ocean The way she made me fall in love with her Fascination pulls magnetic me to her soft floors of ocean I never trusted her each forceful layer of free water but she tricks into submission and I don't mind may she wear upon my aura shell do her worst I never wanted to fall in love with you She will not let me drink and if I do claims me chokes me 'til I drown Sipping your eyes let me look away before you claim mine and I yours. ======================= gem this is stunning.... I am so glad I didnt miss this impressive offering...you really have taken your poetry to a higher level with this soulful write. "If you feel heartbreak, distant thunder, lightning, earthquakes ... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
...library |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Whoa...fantastic....keeping it. Maree fate is not just |
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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA |
a little erotic there Gemma. good stuff. but i don't dig the ocean.. |
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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA |
cuz what you say is nicer than your reply. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Gemma, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, such pure sensuality fills this and may love keep ebbing to your shores like the ocean waves and tidepulls! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 Aaaaargh! What do I say to all these beautiful replies? God, you've got me feeling all overwhelmed.Just, Thankyou, each reply really touches me, you're all too kind my pretties. I don't know what made me remember the beauty of falling in love amidst all my anguish over it yesterday. But it was good to remember, and feeeel again. I suppose I just realised as much as I fear love like I do the sea, I love it more, and feel drawn to it. I don't trust the sea, but have always loved her, much like I do love, and him, the one who capsized me boat! Falling in love is risky, but you can't stop it. Much like waves coming in over sandcastles you'v just bloody well made! sighhhhh. Do I HAVE to love him always? me mother says I will, and i think she's right. I'll finish rambling now, like a freak, i make no sense, but i know what i mean! Kisses to you all.   |
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