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....Eclipse of the Heart.....
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....Eclipse of the Heart..... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. 
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She gracefully touches me with smiles of radiance thus leaving my heart in eclipse still recalling in my mind a darkness yet lingers in my heart as my body begins to feel the warmth of her radiance touching me the eclipse has passed over my heart and now I'm filled by the light of her radiance truely life has many eclipses but with love in ones heart darkness passes |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderfully written..  |
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charm Junior Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 13 |
Very lovely |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
She gracefully touches me with smiles of radiance thus leaving my heart in eclipse very nice opening lines... I enjoyed! |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
Yes this is so pretty |
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charm Junior Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 13 |
Very good |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
This is very good |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Last stanza captures it all, Glenn. Well done, Sir... |
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Vic New Member
since 2003-09-30
Posts 3 |
This touches the heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Smiles of radiance .... so lovely and ... healing! Thank you Glenn. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely written  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
To Charm and Mystic One please only reply once to my poetry, twice is not necessary, thank you,,, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I loved the way this ended with a positive feeling. Very nice.  Love, Shara~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Happy Poet Junior Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 10 |
Glad i found this just in time |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, that's lovely and so true, dear QjQ. Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Glenn~ THIS is why I miss you here~  Soooooo lovely~ Be happy ... be loved~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Just lovely, Glenn! Patricia |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well said! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang, I thought you were back  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may an eclipse of joy cycle through your heart everyday and wash your tears away to rainbows! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Glen, this is a great write...Rita |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
this was very sweet, and lovely. Love, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sweet, and gentle passages Glen. TD |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Much truth lies herein...Nicely done... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You do love write beautifully..... Hope all is well with you!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
vwery nice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
astounding |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Q! Where are you? Oh, this was lunar magic! Loverly!  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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