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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-11-14 09:44 AM


An African Shaman unfolds entangled
Lives and how they’re sharpened by an
Unseen fragment of talk

He is a revolutionary of social injustice
Fulfilling his destiny, mine along with it
Our paths crossed unleashing
Enormous human energies

I snicker, and clearly not meaning the candy Bar
While a sliver of soap drowses by my side
Holding my hand, like an unafraid child

Terrified of an overdose I close the door hard
Jamming pieces of muslin cloth in my mouth
To dim any thoughts from spewing out
My window into the streets
After all, it was my jail, my dirty
Dishes in the sink…

The corridor empty, but still hearing  
Muffled growls of a man’s voice…
With flesh scorched I laid combat
Outside my door

Dark gray stones felt the sword of lost money
Smothered voices possessed any rooms which were left
There was no vacancy in the walls of my mind
Nothing rocked, dim lights climbed

Climbed
                Climbed
                                Climbed
                                              Out of breath
Chocking, but surviving

Who figured?

Slowly, as if pleading for my wretched life
Ropes lifting around my neck…pulling me
Hard like dead weight to the outside and
Across an ocean…with the Shaman yelling
“Another soul way to far from home”  “Didn’t I tell
you to stop that useless weeping for mankind?”

Then the earth exploded with fire and metaphor…killing
Everything everywhere…..while I stood fixed with
My feet nailed to the floor of this unfortunate air.

As if obeying the command to live, a great river of care opened
Everywhere about all the cities of the Earth
Young voices caressed the mean ness of storms
Taming them with charged passion, without pause
And a might big purse

Rooms began to grow doors, with no walls and
Victorian paper drew the most astounding classic
Fabrics…..
Where music no longer brooded
Now by irony, there is a strange essence filtering
Every living thing…like a strange mist, overseeing all

And before my eyes appears this giant dish washer
Large enough for all my dirty dishes…with a handy new stain
Erasure….one of those “Must have Products”

I felt no longer stillborn, but charged with an ember rose

Before leaving the shaman stunned me with human feeling
Wailing for smiling faces and explosions of luck
Now I’m certain that if there’s anything around me at all
It is real estate, no pun intended
Racing down whispering hello, taking me in it’s arms
And there, right before my eyes, he’s paying attention to
Moral dilemma…the way all people do. In their own way and time

Now my streets are filled with standing ovations, with the noise
Of clapping coming from my own hands
Tears of joy strumming my face…my pearls are fake
And my diamonds purchased on ebay….
Yet…that Shaman who was a business major
Took a law degree, just to free me! Me!  Can you imagine?


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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-11-14 09:49 AM


well done
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-11-14 09:51 AM


LeeJ
The ways of the mind are surely a mystery.

carol
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3 posted 2003-11-14 12:24 PM


A very good write I loved it thanks for sharing

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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