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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-09-30 01:40 AM

Between branches
tempers the wind
a vanilla moon rose
peaking through leafs
a crescent sheen
tilting sideways
quiet takes
rocked in the sway
caught in the pause
beaming at me
I thought of you then
sighing my way~

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-30 01:41 AM

I'm in awe.. at this moment...

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-30 02:29 AM

yes!!! i have had theese moments,,

terrific penning,,,

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27

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beyond the doors of perception

3 posted 2003-09-30 02:37 AM

beautiful imagery. brief, yet says so much. my fave
"I thought of you then
sighing my way~"
humph! I wish, sigh~

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-09-30 03:24 AM

caught in the pause
beaming at me
I thought of you then
sighing my way~

Sometimes those sighs are very loud.
Aren't they, Lori?

Hugs

Ethel

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-09-30 03:29 AM

Simply beautiful, Lori. I love this.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2003-09-30 03:31 AM

sighing my way~

love that Ms Blues

Maree.

passing shadows
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displaced

7 posted 2003-09-30 03:39 AM

I dunno...for some strange reason, this made me hungry...for ice cream and rolls...and more of your writings!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-09-30 03:57 AM

Well dang, peaking should have been peeking,
but it's all the same when it comes to emotions.
Seems I'm always on the verge of peaking, and peeking~ Here's looking at you!!

Ms. Meg, Glenn, Joe, Ethel, Vicky, Maree, and Dixie Darlin', thanks for the read,
love you much for reading me like you do!

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-30-2003 04:11 AM).]

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2003-09-30 07:33 AM

Between branches
tempers the wind

love these lines Bluesy.... and loved the whole piece... nicely done my friend..nicely done indeed!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2003-09-30 08:14 AM

a beautiful, beautiful sigh Lori.
Very nicely done from your gem pen...HUGS

suthern

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Louisiana

11 posted 2003-09-30 01:40 PM

Beautiful imagery, excellent write! *S* I like this very much, Bluesy One.

Mysteria

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British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2003-09-30 01:43 PM

Lori you are sure getting SO good at those images. SO few words that say SO much! I do believe you have your own style and it sure suits you. I agree with Ron (those were my favorite lines as well.)

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

13 posted 2003-09-30 05:25 PM

I was there with you taking in the scene .... sighing my way.
Beautiful!
Love and hugs. Margherita

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

14 posted 2003-09-30 05:43 PM

enjoyed this much

Aimster
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Charlotte, NC

15 posted 2003-09-30 05:58 PM

Lori...

this was just so beautiful. your
writing is always so elegant. you
always write your heart so well!
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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16 posted 2003-09-30 06:39 PM

Between branches
tempers the wind
a vanilla moon rose
peaking through leafs
a crescent sheen
tilting sideways
========================

love the images this paints in me mothy mind...lovely sigh of poetry Lori...
even if it aint about the ocean.

"If you feel heartbreak, distant thunder, lightning, earthquakes ...
If you wonder why the earth moves ... this is me missing you."

JH

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

17 posted 2003-09-30 07:59 PM

"Blues" - sighing...

BC

Susan Caldwell
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Florida

18 posted 2003-09-30 08:11 PM

This was great!!

Susan

Martie

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California

19 posted 2003-09-30 09:04 PM

Lori...Lovely, like you!

Duncan
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20 posted 2003-09-30 09:50 PM

I'll read your poem, if you'll take a kitten?!?!?!?

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

21 posted 2003-10-01 02:00 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is just gorgeous, sweet friend, and may you always sigh all the way home and make up a pretty jingle out of your hearts whimsical delights! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is sooooooo uplifting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

22 posted 2003-10-01 09:41 AM

Mann Bluesy YES
seems as if I have been sighing my way through life for far too long
start to breathe . . .
*smile*
tweets
xxoo

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

23 posted 2003-10-02 09:29 AM

Ooh, you do know how to capture a moment....

...and how to share it. Thanks for doing both.

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

24 posted 2003-10-03 07:12 PM

tempers the wind
a vanilla moon rose
peaking through leafs

light as a sigh....yes so aptly named, this poem
and i love that blonde.............

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

25 posted 2003-10-03 07:17 PM

Beautiful Bluesy!
And...love what you've done to your pic!
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

26 posted 2003-10-03 11:00 PM

Thank you all~ so much!! I feel badly when I don't reply to my poems but I don't always know what to say, especially when my poetry gets personal. *shrugging* and hugging you all.

Oh and Duncan, thanks anyway, but I don't need another pet, to pet...I have four cats and a puppy...believe it or not!!! LOL~

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