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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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How much further must I go how many more E-ticket rides I'm sorry, Mr. Toad, but I'm afraid I've gone too many rounds in search of something not yet found in wild rush of 'drenaline 'round blinded curves through hidden doors Can't take much more I'm tired of this Perhaps it's time I exit now and place a sign of warning here Perhaps a ride on carousel my life keeps spinning anyhow, I might as well ...slow down and watch... enjoy it for little while I wave as lookers stare me down in wonder of one such as this in childish turn of round and round but hey...it's safe I won't fall off no risk in this the circular in know of what is yet to come in recognize of "here before" Yet, even this has ups and downs and hungry beasts in grin surround lions, tigers, bears, oh my... and music, mocking clouds my head and spin I spin and greet each turn as if it's new the people change it must be true I'm getting somewhere making progress moving on and yet I spin... ~vlraynes When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-20-2003 02:19 PM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Perhaps it's time I exit now and place a sign of warning here Perhaps a ride on carousel my life keeps spinning anyhow, I might as well ...slow down and watch... Now, Vicky, this is a really cool write.... It kinda made me a little dizzy, but a good kind of dizzy....like on a carousel. LOL  Hugs  Ethel |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
gee hows Mr Toad ever going to become a prince ifen ya don't smooch him,, very nice penning here vicky,, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah what a write vicky, enjoyed it, even that I get dizzy by spinning words. Great expressed! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is fantastic Vic, wow. I'm spinning along side, thats me on the lion.. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Fantastic Vicky...quite the ride...I was getting dizzy myself. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...Life sometimes feels that way...like you're moving so fast and end up back at the same place you started...it is kind of discouraging. Maybe you should try another ride? Seriously, the feeling in this is so well done. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
 I put the universe on notice once.. um, maybe more than once... [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (09-20-2003 07:46 PM).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This is just too cool. Now that I read it slower *grin* Good stuff  Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Kewl... Spin around five times... Do three laps around PiP... and click your heels eight times... You'll land somewhere for sure...  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
this made me dizzy. no kidding. but the meter was perfect and everything was absolutely ...i dunno. absolutely Vicky  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Vicky, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I believe we must awlays move ahead but all at once, we need to spin and enjoy each moment and what we have so then the memory's image is clear and we can cherish what was given to us without having to constantly change and forget everything! (big hugggsssssss) This is a beautiful ride of a poem, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Vicky, what a great write. I can certainly relate as much of my time is spent going in circles and I never seem to get anywhere. Maybe we should try the Ferris Wheel!!! Hugs, Marti |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How well you described my weekend, Vicky! I got off the ride of life and spent time with three of my five grandchildren this weekend...and speaking of lions, and tigers, and bears, I think I have something to send you later on tonight...in the shape of a large white tiger... HA! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jesus Vicky . . . you do read my mind now, don't you? Ohhh . . a stop is quite nice, yes stay away from the flying monkeys they scare me (those wings . . .) You will soon be riding free just as you were meant to xxoo |
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