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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I watch you I think about tomorrow Pray I will never let you go Time is still there We are young Someday We soon grow up Maybe We won't live If you go I will be still love you Loving you forever Looking in your eyes Soon The sun will rise Together We shall see again If this cannot be done Time won't change Time won't be cruel If you only knew I be still loving you If things are not sure to hold The time against us But you should know Only thing I still love you If you were mine [This message has been edited by vandana (09-30-2003 05:47 PM).] |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Very nice Vandana, I enjoyed your poem. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Wonderful sentiments vandana. I enjoyed this so much. Hugs, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Vandana, I hope with all my heart this love still remains true to you and if not that you truly will find the deepest love of all your heart so very much deserves! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful Vandana...much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A clear affirmation of a love strongly felt. Thank you for sharing it. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awww...this is so loving, and sweet..devoted and dedicated love. Very nice!  Love, Shara~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I hope the one this poem is about will get to see it. Then perhaps they will know what could be theirs. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's hard to go up against your heart! Much enjoyed vandana~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 gosh...this tugs at my heart |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
very nice, indeed! thank you Peace, Joe |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the write n read,,,, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful and touching... I like this very much. |
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