First Love ( Breaking The Rules )

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Open Poetry #29

First Love ( Breaking The Rules )

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

0 posted 2003-09-29 12:16 PM

I know Senryu's and Haiku's aren't suppose to rhyme,
but this one does, so I broke the rules of poetry.

First Love
Senryu
By Paul Wilson

Teach me what you will
Love within my heart instill
All my dreams fulfill

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-29-2003 03:46 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-09-29 12:20 PM

Lovely...simply lovely.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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2 posted 2003-09-29 12:29 PM

wonderful!

break the rules any time you please

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

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Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-09-29 01:08 PM

Awwww...now that was sweet...what lovely words. Just melted my heart. What a sweet thing to read. Thanks for sharing this wonderful little bit of yourself! Precious words.

Love,
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-29 01:16 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I dream so very much of having first love for real, sweet friend, it must be the most beautiful feeling in the world and I wish for each and every day to make you fall in love all over again happily with this love! (big hugggssssss) Yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

5 posted 2003-09-29 03:43 PM

Nancy...Thanks dear lady. Your words mean so much to me. Glad you liked this...Paul

passing shadows...If you insist.Glad you enjoyed Thanks for the read & reply...Paul

SharaRose...Thanks for that sweet reply. I really appreciate it...Paul

Noah...Someday my friend, someday love will find you again.Thanks as always for your kind words...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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