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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-09-29 11:28 AM

There should be pools of blood here,
In this place I’ve suffered in,
Where walls collect screams of fear
Silently smeared layers deep.

There should be pools of tears shed
On this grim spot where I’ve been,
Pools to mingle with the bled
Fluids from my body seep.

But all that’s here are dark pools
Depression, despair, and dim
Where emotion can not cool
Where lost ability to weep.

Even the pools of dark goes
Fleeing as the sun shine in
Taking away my shadows
Allowing the day to reap.

There should be pools of my gloom
So I go leaving nothing
But light in an empty room
That takes all day long to creep

Gloom

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-29 11:55 AM

Fitting right up to your name, Sir
and snugging it in tight, less we
ever fear that you would veer from
writing what you know...

although I wish I could...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-09-29 12:03 PM

If Only...

It is in the loss,
words that grip,
squeeze the breath from the living
stopping time, none for the tears and pain,
just the etchings of memories when...

childhood crying out
wanting to go back
to spirit the past
and souvenir every moment,
even those of reprimand
if only...

What is there to hold onto,
but each other
those dark pools wanting to sorrow,
to drown the journey
to imprison the gloom within.

Words cannot describe, can only mingle
in a time of crisis, when somber
and dark in hue are our thoughts
and melancholy becomes us...

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-09-29 12:20 PM

Oh Gloomy!! This was ever so good!

And you're right there should be something left behind to show our suffer...

Susan

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-09-29 12:30 PM

I understand

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