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Regret it later |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
In haste, we waste the chance to taste the finer things routine replaced and blind, we find we never dined on daring things routine declined A glance, by chance at lifes expanse gives one last hope to learn to dance or look behind and nevermind regretting things you'll never find or look behind and be confined by all new things routine maligned [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (09-22-2003 04:50 PM).] |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Great write, Darkling. It's all about taking those chances! Well penned as usual. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Good one. Intriguing rhyme scheme, and a bit of wisdom sparkles through. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I think you're reading my mind... Regrets are like bitter wine, they not only bite, they burn!!! Nice going Jason~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good,, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Jason...I love this...both the message and the verse. Enjoyed the rhyme and flow too...reads like a chant. Wonderfully done, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
so busy we can't take the time to enjoy what we have, and so settled into the rut-ine that we take for granted our very lives, yes? My mind loves a rhyme - very nice. Peace, Joe from the big MT |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jason, I love your rhyme in this one, too.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always have such awesome rhyme schemes and themes! I really enjoy you. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
This was not ordinary rhyme, it had twists and turns inside my head (if that makes sense)betwwen looking back, and not.  very catching, you got me thinking now... ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jason, Well done, enjoyed. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I loved the rhyme, and i loved how true it is! "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Jason, one of your best yet. I enjoyed both rhyme and message. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jason, excellent! the rhyming in this was so cool...love all the inner rhyming you got going on here! take care. amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Decisions, decisions, what's a person to do? Methinks time just takes it's course. Sure we can turn that tide by choices we make if we *want* to affect a change, but not always is change in the cards at that time. Timing is everything! So there. hehe  ..Just kidding..here's a smiley--  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In haste, we waste the chance to taste the finer things routine replaced So true and beautifully said. Love, Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Routine is always a slow death in my mind! I believe we should all have a "life" and not a "living" and explore and adventure the great beyond out there and find relationships between everything! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is most well-written, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Thank you all, for reading and kind words. Jason |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Jason, this was so exceptional! I enjoyed it extremely! Significant messages and perfect rhyming A real winner! Great Job! Richy |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason this is amazing, truly and here: A glance, by chance at lifes expanse gives one last hope to learn to dance yes, always dance, please? for me, ok? and you too *smile* xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Jason~ Sue stole my fav lines... Loved it. Susan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Jason, I loved it!  ~ Carpe diem! Linda |
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