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Painted Gold
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Painted Gold |
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freehode New Member
since 2003-09-29
Posts 9 |
Callous serf in empress clothing Keep watch, her fangs are showing Rubies and sapphire all glisten and glitter Alas, she’s painted gold A comedy of errors subvert her grace No sign present on the etched face Claws of paper yet strength of a mace A supine countenance hides a fervent pace Beware of that which she shines As though it appears bright and true Alas, she’s painted gold. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
deception is the smiling face you see on me good write here |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good penning,,, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hmmm... just a tad obscure, but solid enough to excuse that. I'd consider clarifying the lady's role in life, but that's about it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes! All that glitters isn't gold! Lover beware!  Hi, Freehode! Welcome to Passions! ~ Warm welcoming hugs! Earth Angel |
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