Open Poetry #29 |
coup de grace |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This I wish I'd never seen That I could have done without Grant me veils of vagary if mercy be a bargaining I'd prefer his scorn to this-- his eyes pitied me. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
pitied? must be a fool... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...suffer no fools, Serenity... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Off with his head!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How awful of him!! I'm with Susan! Love ya lady! ~Hugs~
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Pity? It's usually a mirror of the other's own soul. Rarely does the one being pitied need it. It's the one that casts the pity that needs pitying. They can not see their own innate sick need to feel they are above all others. It seems an act of compassion, but in reality it is taking on the place of judging another's worth. Love, Shara~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I don't know Shararose but I sure like her thinking as it is 100% correct! The best part of this poem is knowing that it can turn around in a heartbeat! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Perhaps his dose needs to be adjusted? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Can't add to whats been said. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity....Sometimes it's hard being able to read faces the way you do...but mostly I'll bet it's good. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
There are none so blind as he who will not see...if anyone is pitiful it would be him dearheart |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh...ouch... When the power of love overcomes the |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and smiling serenely. He really shouldn't count me out, huh? I just may get all "chumba wumba" on his ass! "I get knocked down, but I get up again, 'cause yer never gonna keep me down..." Thank you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K - I know this is a bit long but please read it , my goodness . . . it just said you needed to read this: http://www.sabian.org/alicech7.htm xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sue?...I know you posted that link for Karen, but...thank you...smile. Hugging me sisters... When the power of love overcomes the |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow... |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
nice Karen, Joke is on him. Jason |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hon I know you are always gonna get back up, much like myself my poetic sister of words... you ARE a survivor... *wink* Hugs to ya gal. II must have had my mommas will and Gods Amazing Grace.. I'm a Survivor....{reba} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-01-2003 03:45 PM).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, gentle one..Pity? Nay...for envy would be a better word, for not understanding is to try to show superiority, realizing not that the lack of understanding is a fault, not an attribute..so, yea..envy for wishing he could soar to your heights...very gentle smile |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
If he pitied you, than he doesn't know the wondrous woman you are.So much said in so little. Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh, heck no, that one who cast the stone at that glass house is the one who needs to be pitied, for if people like him spent more time seeing the good in everyone and not judging books by covers or everything by critics, the world would be a much better place! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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