Open Poetry #29 |
Keep Talking = Writing (Kaoru's Challenge) |
Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Keep Talking = Writing (Pink Floyd) For such a long time Your words were suppressed Concealing from the world The talent that you posses But you broke the bond Releasing your mind and pen Now your words are being read By someone other than you Your imagination and your thoughts On paper for anyone to read That is the way it should be Just be sure you Keep Writing |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
*wink* not a prob...smiling at...you...h |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I only know my songs, knowing the whole world knows other songs... this must be one of them. Thank you, Sir... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Amature2 - keep those words coming and keep writing... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Amature, I like this. And you keep writing, too!! Hugs Ethel |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Great musical choice, and a wonderful write..well met, sir. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Amature, beautiful tribute and beautiful writing challenge well met . . . all that you are . . and all that you see . . . now you have me going on about Floyd *smile* xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) A handful of Pink Floyd songs ("Welcome To The Machine", "Another Brick In The Wall Part II", "Money", "Wish You Were Here") are among my all-time favorites and I have deep admiration for this song also, as it seems to have more of an upbeat spirit somehow and really demolishes that wall down for every aspiring writer! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, keep talking, my dear friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Me loves Pink...((((Pink))))) Hey You, Yes Mr. Floyd. Come in and fix this brick in my wall!! Then when you are done tell the teacher leave me ALONE! Don't need more lessons taught! Shara~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Who needs Roger Waters when one has Amature???? This is indeed one that does the written word justice. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
the lunatic is in my head... And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Thank You all for your comments and replies. And a special Thanks to Kaoru for the Challenge. |
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