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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Not the softest hand whilst counting heads I believe I was another easy number that was difficult to count For every length and end you think belongs upon this head there are a thousand more not added and twice that, broken Did you see any faces you want to forget? 'Tales of painful love' Oh you said it would not become an excuse little did I know my own tale is my excuse to become faceless antisocial gripping every tear begging them back fearing when last salt wound falls I really will be empty Fall in love easy but you never fall out with such grace do you do you? Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
you penned your feelings into this well,,, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you end everything so well. I am jelous  nah...I lava u. he's got me saying that now And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gemma~ Darling lady ... you are so right about the 'falling out' ... it's never, ever easy~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"For every length and end you think belongs upon this head there are a thousand more not added and twice that, broken" perfection in words...  Susan |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
No Gemma, you never fall out nearly as painlessly as you fall in. Wisdom sometimes carries a heavy burden and toll. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, it never is easy to give up love as love should be meant to keep everything together forever! (sad sigh) This is honest and true, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Great thoughts, love seems to come easy, but to when love hurts or leaves it is hard. Enjoyed~ARH |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
maybe you will be empty when that last bit of saltwater falls.... but prehaps empty of the bad stuff, not all emotion. well done. fragmented like a broken heart. i dig it. through the ravages of sleeplessness lies the comfort of the night |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
No, never......but if you're lucky in the truest sense, you never fall out at all. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
No...never easy... You've penned this beautifully, Gemma...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem, God, no hardest thing I have ever done in my life was not to fall into the embrace but on my face and have the courage to dust off attempt to fix my hair and move on with a smile yes, THAT smile (the plastic one) this one left a thorn in my side ooh aching gemma Beautifully though xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-24-2003 09:08 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
phhhssst, your not an easy number, your a loving heart, soul and mind, all rolled into one awesome lady!!! Along with the songs you sing, the inspiration you articulate and the reality within dreams....you shine! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
no you never do..oh those last lines kill |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I know the feeling sweets..I always seem to be at a loss for words...about everything...of course you know I'm the quiet, shy type anyhow..... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and twice that, broken Did you see any faces you want to forget? 'Tales of painful love' Oh you said it would not become an excuse little did I know We never go out the way we came in, like we're expected to? That's some knitty gritty poetry~ Can I have your autograph? Sweet, gemma gemma~  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"I believe I was another easy number that was difficult to count"  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Fall in love easy but you never fall out with such grace do you do you Oh God, Gemma...I hope I NEVER have to go through those pains again. Even though my Honey and I are apart a lot, I know that I have him. Goodness, I don't know what I would do without him and his love. My friend, this one makes me feel for you more than any of yours I've read since you've been heartbroken. I really thought of how I would feel in your place in this one. Love ya, sweet friend.  Ethel Mae |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Oh how true you've worded it. What grace is losing one can you pretend. Fake empty smiles is all one can offer at this point.Good job |
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